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Re: The Emotion of Anger
It's just the second and fourth lines that are supposed to rhyme....
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: The Emotion of Anger
A piece of paper, Ripped to shreds. Blankets yanked apart, Now held by just a thread. A hole punched Into the wall, A bruised hand Shows it all. Clothes kicked ...
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Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
(ZT) I met up with the experiments that had just flown out and asked them if they were all okay. They were shaken, but no one had any injuries. They ...
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
We should all meet outside by me... which is flying in the air right above the main door. Until the whitecoats see me...and rose.
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: DoaV (2nd Version): Prologue Part 1
"Quote: Apparently, the man who said ‘you are what you choose to be’ was a liar. A really horrible liar who took joy in making innocent little children believe that ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: The Epic Quest to a Far Away Land
This was good, very funny, and Clover was a good character. But the dog thing confused me. At first it seemed like you were talking about... a girl was my ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: DoaV (2nd Version): Prologue Part 1
"Feedback questions 1) Did you find Yazra's mother's metaphor on the birds and the bees to be a bit long? No, I liked it... but you could probably shorten it ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
(ZT) I waited for a few minutes, dreadfully thinking that no one else would come. I would hate it by myself. Then two others, a boy and a girl, ran ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
(ZT) Checking to make sure that everyone had escaped, I ran towards the door. Nate and a few others were stopped, but I ignored them and ran by, knowing the ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: The Sellswords
EDIT: Sorry, but I've decided that I won't have the time to do two storybooks right now. I'm really sorry about the confusion, but my character will have to die... ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
(ZT) (Sorry I'm writing so much, but I kind of want to say this, and I don't know if I'll have time later... is this not allowed, please tell me, ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: The Girl I Met Today
Oh boy. This is the most stupid poem I've ever written. I wrote it when I [thought] I was in love. So... yeah. This isn't very great. Ignore it! BBB ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
(ZT) I looked over and saw someone trying to push open the bars. I ran over quickly and saw him fall over inside the cage. After seeing others open them, ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
(ZT) I heard a commotion just on the other side of the wall. The wall I was walking right next to. I reached out and threw the whitecoat backwards, knocking ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The New Breed
(ZT) I was sitting in my cage. Alone. I was, like, the only flippin' one of the experiments who had to be all alone in a room. I smiled. It ...
Feb 20, 2008
